UtopiaTalk about the guy who made one big mistake
he choose to leave the house that fate filled day.
On his way home two lives would end all because
he drunk his sorrows away again.
Now he's routing in jail the way things should be!
Justice some might see!
At the guys home sits a wife and a kid.
A boy 3 years old who wanted to be like him,
The boys joy was time with his dad, see his mom was
too sick, always stuck in bed.
Her tears flowing down her face.
Soon she knows that no one will be their to
help the boy grow.
Now our nation tries to be a utopian society.
A life for a life thats the utopian way., instead
of a world where we get to fix our mistake.
How can you say your any better than him.
You took others lives by taking way his!!!
Sympathy
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I luv it I luv it.
I'll write an actual response with suggestions later, cause i'm too hyper to focus right now.
^_^ Luv ya!
Talk about the guy who made one big mistake
he choose to leave the house that fateful day.
On his way home two lives would end.
He drank his sorrows away again.
Now he's rotting in jail the way things should be!
Justice some might see!
At home sits his wife and kid.
The boy 3 years old who wanted to be like him,
the boys’ joy was time with his dad, his mom
too sick, always stuck in bed.
Her tears flowing down her face
she knows that soon no one will be there
to help the boy grow to be a man.
Now our nation tries to be a utopian society.
A life for a life that’s the utopian way, instead
of a world where we get to fix our mistake.
How can you say you’re any better than him?
You took others lives by taking his away!!!
it's been posted for ever and your the
first person to say anything!!!
i still dosen't seem to flow to me
what do you think?
Do you draw?
and do you like anime?
Anix
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AnixRayne
i do a little bit of drawing but i haven't done in a realy long time.
i like how they look but i have never been good at drawing people.
i can see what i want to draw in my head.
but when i start to draw, i get one side of the face and can't get the other to match at all.
for my drawing anything like people or animals is iritating and annoying.
but i would love to be able to do it.
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