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Monster on his back........

Fri Nov 6, 2009, 10:46 AM
Ying and yang came together
when they met
soul mates from the start
their futures set

she love fantasy and he
wanted to be the one to make
them her reality
but like all stories we have
to recite
a monster has to come
to light

One day she saw the monster there
on the back of her lover fair
she went to try and assist him when
the monster got angry and attacked
her then

(Chorus)
you are a good man all can see
but your monster keeps attacking me
please mkae him leave so we can
be happy in our fantasy
(end chorus)

it went like that for a couple of years
every time he attacked brang more tears
the monster blinding all his sight
so he could not see the pain she tried
to fight

dreams that once where of happy things
turned to dark and dreadful things
finally she said i can't take any more
and threatened to leave out the door

(Chorus)

finally brought to light
the pain she tried to fight
he begged her not to leave
i will take care of the monster
you will see

a couple more year the monster
came and went every time
he was stronger
she was starting to think they
could no longer be together

(chorus)

finally one day her lover came to her
and said
I will fight for us until the end
the monster is gone and wont return
because the love i have for you is pure

and like all fantasy's should end
they lived happily ever after
the end.

  • Mood: Happy Tears

New art

Sun Aug 16, 2009, 10:08 AM
I POSTED!!!!!!!

as most of you might have noticed some of my art doesn't have really creative names that's because i downloaded like 13 pics all at once and then put them all on and by the time i got around to naming them it was like 2 am and my name creativity went to hell lol i'm going to try to post something new twice a month but with me just having a new baby and hopefully getting school started i don't know how realistic that goal is but i guess we'll just have to wait and see.....

  • Mood: Joy
  • Eating: Hot pocket
  • Drinking: sprite

Utopia

Tue Jan 22, 2008, 6:20 PM
(this is a poem that i wrote it needs work it doesn't flow the way i want it 2. I'm hoping for help on it and i hope one day to make it into a song give me back your advice and what you think of it sorry i can't spell)

Talk about the guy who made one big mistake
he choose to leave the house that fate filled day.
On his way home two lives would end all because
he drunk his sorrows away again.
Now he's routing in jail the way things should be!
Justice some might see!
At the guys home sits a wife and a kid.
A boy 3 years old who wanted to be like him,
The boys joy was time with his dad, see his mom was
too sick, always stuck in bed.
Her tears flowing down her face.
Soon she knows that no one will be their to
help the boy grow.
Now our nation tries to be a utopian society.
A life for a life thats the utopian way., instead
of a world where we get to fix our mistake.
How can you say your any better than him.
You took others lives by taking way his!!!

  • Mood: Sympathy

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